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In this life we most hold dear,
Our presence's purpose is not clear,
Yet we continue to live without thought,
Of the niche in life we have forgot.

Few people speak and fewer listen,
Of the possible answers from our God's wisdom,
For I know I am one of the lost,
Ignorant of the words that he has taught.

Yes I have not a strand of faith,
In the one some look to as the creator of fate,
I deny his existence from the lack of proof,
And yet I know its possible that I deny the truth.

Why do I not believe like others do,
Why would he make someone that wasn't true,
If he created this universe and all of its laws,
Why would he make humanity to be so flawed.

Maybe independent will is his divine plan,
And I am following it to the very end,
Regardless to what my actions may be,
I sometimes wish his voice would find me.
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I wrote this a few months ago but I couldn't think of two lines to finish it. Just a few moments ago I found it on my computer and decided to read it. When I reached the end I just typed in two lines as if I knew them for years. So yeah...its finished.

This poem does reflect part of me and my thoughts. And yes, at this current point in time I'm an atheist.

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:iconle-fwah:
I have a brother :'D

Actually I'm agnostic but that's close enough. >>
:iconsaiberious:
Close only counts in horse shoes, hand grenades, and high yield atomic weapons.
:iconhikariravenfeather05:
*cries religiously*? XD I Dun know. AT LEAST IT RYHMES D: Omg none of my lame poems ryhme...still. Pwnsome by teh Saibzy >:3 you should write more poetry. And I need to post the poem I made for you! D< *clinghugs* x3

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I'll never find another love like this.
I love you, my Fausty <3
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:iconsaiberious:
You made one for me? o.o
Erm, thanks in advance.
And if you didn't notice, all of the lines don't rhyme. I'm not a genius.

*hugs*

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